tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7725608523499240562024-02-20T20:53:09.384-08:00Nelsa Roberto's Out of the WordworkPublished and still trying to figure it all out.out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.comBlogger274125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-83862907216933869602014-07-15T09:36:00.000-07:002014-07-15T09:36:40.109-07:00Top 10 Things I Love About TorontoOver a year since I’ve blogged??? Good Lord. Well, I need to change that.<br />
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So in the spirit of counting blessings – which I’m reminded that I need to do more of – I’m going to try and blog about the good things in my life. And one of those is something I take for granted every day: the city in which I live. I always tell people how much I love Toronto and some agree and others don’t understand what there is to love about the city many people call The Big Smoke. Well, a lot, as it turns out. It’s more than just traffic congestion and people going too fast to enjoy what they’ve got here. Without further ado, here is my Top Ten Things I Love about Toronto list.<br />
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The villages within the city: Bloor West Village, Chinatown, Little Italy, Little Portugal, The Kingsway, Leaside, Greektown. You name it and Toronto’s got it. These villages within the city make the city feel more vibrant and less anonymous.<br />
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The ravines. Toronto is a city of creeks and rivers that snake through the city and help break up the concrete jungle. Once you follow along a footpath and hear the rushing stream beside you it’s like you are transported into the country.<br />
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The parks. From the huge (High Park) to the small neighbourhood parks dotted throughout the city we have a lot of green in this city. Not enough downtown parks for sure but there is still a lot of space to run around in if you need it.<br />
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It’s on the water! We sometimes forget that we have Lake Ontario on our doorstep. But the bike paths along the water remind us that we are not surrounded only by skyscrapers and asphalt. <br />
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Theatre! Thank God for the Mirvish family and all the other theatrical productions both professional and amateur that dot our city. I’ve seen productions here that could and do rival some Broadway productions.<br />
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The Shopping. Seriously, from the discount to the high end you don’t have to travel far to get what you need.<br />
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World renowned hospitals. Hypochondriac that I am I appreciate knowing I’m only minutes away from some of the best health care in the country, if not the world. Anyone with kids thanks the heavens every day for The Hospital for Sick Children. You name the illness and we’ve got a hospital that specializes in treating it. Go Toronto!<br />
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Sports teams. Okay, I may not be a Blue Jays or Maple Leaf’s fan but I appreciate the fact that we have a centre big enough to accommodate that kind of entertainment.<br />
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Transportation. Specifically Pearson International Airport, the Island Airport and the TTC. Seriously, I love having an airport in the city where I live. I’m only twenty minutes away from boarding a plane should I ever decide to make a last minute trip to the Bahamas or something. And taking the TTC every day into work allowed me to finish several books and spend every morning and evening commute reading instead of battling traffic. Sure it needs improvement and I hope it gets the money it needs but I’m a big fan.<br />
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And the number one reason that I love Toronto:<br />
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The people. Again, seriously. We are a friendly city (despite our reputation for being snobs). For the most part we are a helpful, polite, peace-loving bunch. Sure, in a city of over 3 million people you are going to have problems (and I have seen some interesting things!) but after living here almost thirty years and having met some superb people in that time, we have an amazing bunch of people in this city.<br />
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I’m sure I could write a few more favourite things about it but I’ll stop with the top ten. What’s your favourite thing about T.O.?<br />
out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-41505334614693554112013-04-29T11:57:00.001-07:002013-04-29T11:57:42.079-07:00The Struggling Writer’s Prayer<br />
I'm in the middle of my current WIP and, given how much My Hockey Mom's Prayer has resonated with the struggles of one aspect of my life, I thought I'd jot down another prayer to get me (and hopefully some of you) through the struggle that is writing a book. I hope you get through your first draft relatively unscathed. I'm in the thick of the battle and I hope to see you on the other side!<br />
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May I find the strength today to open up my document and not be completely paralyzed by the blankness of the page.<br />
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May I grant myself forgiveness if I don’t reach a milestone word count, page count, hours count. Sometimes it is enough to just stare at the page, knowing it is there, and that I have gathered the strength to face it.<br />
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May I kick myself in the butt hard enough to write down a word, a sentence, a paragraph, even if I think it is horrible.<br />
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May I find the strength of will not to immediately delete the word, the sentence, the paragraph, even if I think it is horrible.<br />
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May I have the grace to accept the limitations of my writing, the intelligence to recognize its faults, and the determination to keep working at it to make it better.<br />
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May I take the time to celebrate the small successes, like finishing a chapter, figuring out the next plot point, or describing a scene. <br />
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May I have the courage to kill my darling, hard-fought-for words, and not think I am regressing. May I remember that sometimes to win a war you must retreat in battle and re-group so that the next attack comes out harder, more strategized and infinitely improved.<br />
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And, most of all, may I remember that I am not alone, even though it seems like it. That other writers are facing that blank page, those horrible words, that awful immensity of the challenge ahead and that they are there to offer support, humour, wisdom and, most importantly, wine and chocolate. That one day, the blank page will be filled, that despair will turn to elation, that you will have climbed the mountain and can sit at its peak, drinking your wine and eating that chocolate, and know, in that most fulfilling part of yourself, that you have written a book.<br />
out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com15tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-39139870368082211292013-02-26T10:13:00.000-08:002013-02-26T10:13:45.939-08:00Am I Flogging a Dead Blog?<br />
“Hello?” *Tap, Tap* “Anybody still out there?”<br />
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I won’t be offended by silence if no one responds. After all, I have definitely withdrawn on the blogging business the last few months. But I realized recently that it was four years ago this month that I began blogging. Four years! Holy cow. So much change in four years. Back when I started Out of the Wordwork in 2009, I recognized even then that I was quite late to the game and I joined a bit reluctantly but it was still quite a momentous step for me in terms of entering the social media whirl that was part and parcel of the publishing game. Back then (back in the ‘old days’ Nelsa said in a quavery voice) you almost had to play that game to show potential publishers you were willing to market yourself. But these days, a blog? Meh. Maybe not so relevant.<br />
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I get it. There is already so much information out there on writing and publishing what more can another writer add? Besides, Twitter and Facebook have become the networking communication medium of choice amongst writers so a blog seems unnecessary. And I am certainly struggling with whether to keep this one going. But I’m struggling with a lot of things about publishing and writing these days – social networking is the least of it.<br />
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I’ve even gotten a sense from Facebook and Twitter that many writers are either taking breaks from social networking or lessening their time on those mediums significantly. Maybe it’s the general angst about the book publishing industry and the intensity with which writers must keep pushing in the face of so many obstacles these days that putting pressure on yourself to write a blog for the sake of writing a blog seems foolish. There is so much information out there already that sometimes you feel like you’re just adding to the noise. These days I want less noise not more, hence the title of this post: why keep flogging a dead blog?<br />
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In any case, for all those who still occasionally check in I can’t promise many future posts but I hope you peruse some of the posts from the past. There are a few that many people do find helpful/inspirational or just plain silly. And for those hockey mom’s out there my <a href="http://out-of-the-wordwork.blogspot.ca/2012/09/my-hockey-mom-prayer.html">Hockey Mom Prayer </a>post is the little post that keeps on going! Shared so many times on Facebook and such that I’m amazed. So I guess blogging can sometimes be useful. At least I’ve got a pretty neat record of my life these last four years!<br />
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See you soon (or not!) :)<br />
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out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com10tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-7310341454482084412013-01-25T08:13:00.001-08:002013-01-25T08:13:18.919-08:00Family Stories that Become Legend<div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;">
<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">My brother is a very good story teller. Could be from all his years hanging out at sports bars but mostly it’s because he’s a voracious reader and he loves a good story himself so he recognizes the elements of good storytelling and incorporates them into his tales. He especially loves telling my kids stories of our family as he and I were growing up and, since he’s a few years older than me, has a wealth of funny, embarrassing tales that have kept the kids entertained at otherwise boring family events. The one story that my kids loved hearing the most involves him as a sullen 14 year old, his dark, miserable chore of feeding and taking care of thousands of nasty chickens in a three-storey old chicken barn, and our taciturn, work-is-life attitude, father. I don’t know if I’ll ever use this story in any novel I might write but I want to share it because, like all good family stories, they should be shared. <o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">When my brother was 13, my father moved us from northern Ontario to live and work in a small farming community in southern <st1:place w:st="on"><st1:state w:st="on">Ontario</st1:state></st1:place>. But not only did my dad buy a farm, he bought a farm with a chicken barn on it. It wasn’t going to be just working our butts off in the summer, it would be an all year commitment since caring for chickens and their eggs is an every day, seven days a week, prison of a life. My parents and brother did this for three years before finally getting rid of this thankless business venture.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">But for those three years, my brother was a slave. He had gone from a carefree existence of skating on frozen ponds and lakes and running around with his friends from dawn till dusk with barely anyone telling him what to do to working from dawn till dusk, chickens attacking him on a daily basis, and a growing resentment and anger toward the man who had caused this massive and unwanted upheaval in his life. Over the days, weeks and months of feeding and cleaning after these chickens, my brother grew to especially hate one bird – a rooster actually. While chickens are certainly nasty and think nothing of pecking and attacking the hands that feed them, roosters are especially lethal. This one rooster was very territorial and as soon as he saw my brother enter the barn he would fly at him and try to peck him out of the way. He had even drawn blood. My brother equally hated and feared this rooster with a passion.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">When he couldn’t take it anymore, he told my dad about this one psychotic bird. But Dad just shrugged him off and thought he was trying to get out of work. “Bah! It’s only a chicken! Deal with it.” (or something to that effect only stated in Portuguese) He would have said it in that gruff, dismissive tone he had. While our dad is a sweetheart, at that time in his life he was operating on survival mode and there was no time for coddling children especially his first born son. In his mind, to become a man, meant to work hard, do a good job and never complain about it. Needless to say, this dismissive response to my brother’s serious problem caused him to resent our dad even more. But, like a good son, he continued to do his chores every day, defended himself from the attacking rooster as best he could and kept his simmering anger to himself.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">One day, Dad had to fix a broken heating lamp in the chicken barn. So, while my brother was feeding the chickens on the floor where this rooster kept vigil, my dad joined him. As Dad took out a screwdriver to repair the lamp, the psycho rooster lunged out of the darkness and flung himself at my father. My dad, surprised at the attack, kicked the rooster away, cursing at him. My brother kept feeding the chickens. He laughed silently to himself, thinking “Yeah, old man. Maybe you’ll believe me now.”<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">Dad continued to try and fix the lamp but the rooster didn’t back off. It kept lunging and attacking him. My brother was really enjoying the show at this point. Finally, my dad had had enough. As the rooster was about to lunge at him again, he pulled out his screwdriver, threw it across the barn, speared the attacking rooster in the neck, killing him instantly.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">My brother’s mouth dropped. He watched in awe and amazement as our father walked over to the dead rooster, pulled the screwdriver out of his neck, calmly wiped the blood off on his overalls and turned to my brother and said, “Tell your mother we’re having chicken for dinner tonight.”<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-412483033823750672012-12-31T10:35:00.000-08:002012-12-31T10:35:02.385-08:00On the Eve of … What, Exactly?Well, Happy holidays to everyone! <br />
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I hope you all had a beautiful, restful, peace-filled holiday season. I was lucky to have my family around me this year in our newly renovated house and on the occasion of my big birthday. So, I survived all that, ate too much, drank too much, slept too much and soon will be starting a new year and for the first time in a decade I’m not sure what my new year’s resolutions will be. I feel like I’m on the eve of something important but haven’t figured out what that something will be. Definitely in limbo. Which is kind of okay for me right now.<br />
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I say ‘kind of’ because I’m usually the person who needs a plan. I don’t take meandering go nowhere walks. I like to walk with a purpose. I don’t take vacations that aren’t mapped out to the tiniest detail. I shop with a purpose. I started writing with a purpose. Now I find myself a little … purposeless. It feels weird. Not bad, but <i>weird</i>. Like I’m a slacker or something. Like I should be forcing myself to do this or that and, for sure, to be writing something, dammit! But it's like I’ve hit the pause button. I think I need to do that right now. Life can be extremely hectic and the last ten years have been on speed dial. Where the heck did they go? If the next ten years go by that fast I don’t think I can handle it.<br />
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So, for now, I guess my New Year’s Resolution will be this:<br />
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<b>Take each day and savour one thing slowly.</b> <br />
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Dinner with your husband or children.<br />
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Reading a book for more than ten minutes.<br />
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Doing needlework.<br />
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Walking the dog.<br />
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Talking with an old friend.<br />
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Calling your parents<br />
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Writing when you feel like it, not because you feel guilty that you’re not.<br />
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Whatever it is, don’t rush it. Don’t be thinking of the next thing you have to do or that you’re not doing at that moment. Every moment can have meaning if you appreciate it for what it is – not what you want it to be or think it should be.<br />
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Happy 2013, everyone. Make it a meaningful year.<br />
out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com15tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-54959576921471474222012-11-21T12:51:00.001-08:002012-11-21T12:51:25.339-08:00One Month till End of Days. So, what are your plans?In exactly one month, December 21, 2012, th so-called Mayan Apocalypse, the End of Days, the obliteration of the modern world, the ... oh, you get the idea. The world's gone as of December 22nd. Do I sound flippant? Nay, Nay! as John Pinnette might say (very funny comedian. Look him up.) I'm not flippant at all about the upcoming disaster. My standard response to someone commenting on this disaster is: Of course the world's ending on December 21st! My birthday's the next day and it's one I don't want to face (it ends in a zero, in case you all were curious).<br />
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Alas, my un-concern over the destruction of the world did not go over well with The Boy. When he first heard about this so-called Prophecy last year he got very anxious. He tends to believe in things mystical and there was so much coverage of this event in the news that it seemed like quite a real thing to him. My making jokes about being quite happy not to face the day when I turn ... ugh. <em>That number</em>. ... he did not find funny. So, to make him feel better I said, <br />
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"Well, December 21st is a Friday. Last day of school before the holidays. If it really will be the last day of the world do you want to spend it in school?" <br />
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He shook his head. Of course not.<br />
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"Okay," I responded. "Then here's the plan. For that day and that day only I will take a day off work, let you skip school and we can spend the whole day at the movie theatre watching one movie after another. That way, if the world does end, we can ignore most of it since we'll be busy watching some good movies. Does that make you feel better?"<br />
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He was totally on board with that. <br />
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So, for the last year that's been our plan. We're actually looking forward to it. Daughter One wants to join us now too. She's suggesting we sneak into as many movies as we can on one ticket. I'm not so brazen. Even if no one's around to check, I'll still feel guilty for not paying for a ticket. Not even the end of the world can stop my innate guilt-ridden personality!<br />
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So, what are your plans for the Apocalypse?out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com9tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-71083057189136992682012-11-05T08:41:00.001-08:002012-11-05T08:41:25.565-08:00The Need to Withdraw<div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;">
<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">I have been feeling distinctly social media unfriendly lately. Not that I don’t check in occasionally. I do. I always check Verla Kay’s Blueboards. I read my Twitter stream. I sometimes pop into Facebook (not my favourite site). But I have been an unenthusiastic poster (and blogger!) lately. I’m not sure why that is. It’s not so much social media fatigue, everyone gets that these days. It’s more, I think, to do with my writing. Or, should I say, my lack of writing. And if I’m not writing then I’m feeling a bit … unfocussed. And ticked off with myself. Which makes me feel less like interacting within the community of writers. All because I’m not writing!<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">Part of the problem lies with the fact that no particular story is calling to me right now. I have three different stories in progress. One is on the brink of being finished (has been that way for years) and two others that are just babies with only a few chapters in. I’ve hopped from one to the other to the other, writing a few thousand words here and there but I’m not feeling the compulsion to finish them. Is it because I’m not loving their stories? I think they’re good ideas. Is it their characters? Maybe. I have to love my characters with a passion that borders on obsession. Maybe it’s all the chatter out there about what makes a book sell in this tough market. I’ve completed two books this last year with which I’ve tried to entice agents and editors and neither was enough. Both have paranormal elements and I know the fatigue in paranormal is huge right now. But I loved (still love) both of them so very much. So, I should just stop wallowing and move onward right? Just write another story. And if there is more interest in contemporary and all three of my WIPs are contemporary, then why not finish those? <o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">Maybe it’s because now, after ten years of slogging through the trenches, finally getting published, I know how difficult it is to sell a book. The knowledge about the business side of publishing is creeping in more and more and affecting the artistic side of the process. I keep wondering whether I should focus on this story or that one? Which will entice an agent more? Which one will be more likely to sell?<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">Well, I finally figured it out. I’ve been asking the wrong questions. I have to stop thinking about the business and think about the story. The questions I should be asking aren’t about what will sell. The questions are, and always should be,<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">What characters do I need to find out more about?<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">But if I’m constantly hearing/reading about agent searches, publishing deals, what’s selling, what’s not, how tough it is out there, how saturated the YA market is right now, it pulls me away from what I used to do, every day for years: writing in my little notebook the story of a few people and their lives that may interest only me. I need to get caught up in my characters lives – not get caught up in the life of the publishing industry (as fascinating as it may be).<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">That means I have to withdraw a little. Not completely but enough to center myself again and see if I can get caught up in a story that consumes me more than the idea of selling it does. So, I’ll be a sporadic blogger, twitter, facebook checker for the next while. I hope withdrawing from that side of things means I can find a story I’m passionate about writing again. Because that’s the reason I started writing in the first place. Like one of my favourite quotes says:<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com9tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-12694173223271076122012-10-18T08:37:00.000-07:002012-10-18T08:37:56.706-07:00Seasonal WritingHave you ever wondered what ‘season’ of writer you are? No, I’m not talking about when you wax poetic in your writing about the spectacular fall colours, the bitingly cold winter season, the fragrance of blooming spring flowers or the hot, sticky dog days of summer. I’m wondering whether there are certain times of year whether you feel more or less productive or inspired as a writer?<br />
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Fall has always been my favourite season. No humidity, blazing colours, crisp, cool, earth-scented air. Back to school, back to routine, boots, scarves, sweaters. Ahh, I love fall. And, for some reason, it has also been one of my most productive writing times. Maybe it’s that ‘back to routine’ business – a remnant from prepping to go back to school. That little surge of adrenaline about the school year to come. When I’m getting the kids organized for school and getting my house organized (well, trying to, anyway) after a summer of outside busy-ness it makes my mind sharper. Maybe it’s the cool days and nights where I want to curl up with a good book or, better yet, curl up and write MY good book! Whatever it is, I just feel this particular season helps me to focus better as a writer. <br />
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Winter isn’t far behind as my favourite writing season, mostly because I’m indoors a lot. No surprise, but I’m not a big winter sports fan. Yes, I have to schlep The Boy around to hockey arenas and that does take time but, for the most part, I can carve out some writing hours throughout the winter months much easier than I can in spring or summer mostly due to the weather outside being ‘frightful’.<br />
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So, what about those last two “S” seasons? What is it about Spring and Summer that makes it harder for me to write? It’s not that I don’t write at all during those times. In fact, I just finished my last wip this past June. But the spring fever does hit me hard and I want to be outside, planting flowers, taking in the warmer air and feeling like I deserve a bit of a break from my writing hibernation over the winter. And, with the winters we sometimes get up here, I am pretty much stir crazy by the time April hits. I NEED to be outdoors. Then, in summer, when kids are home, vacations are taken, life just gets more, not less, hectic.<br />
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I know many writers stick to their schedule of daily writing rain or shine, fall, winter, spring, summer, without fail. And I admire those who can do that. But, for me, it’s not that simple. So, I accept that I’m primarily a fall and winter writer and I try and make up for my lack of writerly output, especially in the summer months, by writing as much as I can in the two seasons that I find most productive for me as a writer. I ‘yam what I ‘yam.<br />
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How about you? Do the seasons affect your writing? Or do you shut everything off to write, even the weather outside?<br />
out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-33713652158541613852012-10-04T09:59:00.000-07:002012-10-04T09:59:20.576-07:00Like versus Love“I liked it but I didn’t fall in love with it.” <br />
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Writers have heard this phrase so many times it’s become one of the lexicons of the publishing language. Variations of this phrase have come across in rejections for eons and, intellectually, I know what agents and editors mean when they say this but I hadn’t really understood it myself, in my own writing, until recently.<br />
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I’ve now published two books and I love both of them. I have reread them countless times through the editorial process and did not get vomitously sick of them. That is love. I loved the idea of them before they were written. I loved their characters. I loved how they ended. The love has, and always will be, solid. <br />
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However, during the last few years while my two published works were put out into the world, I also wrote and completed four other books. Some have gotten the “like but not love” from editors and agents. One I haven’t even sent out to get rejected yet and another one has only been slightly submitted. Out of those four books, there is one that I still, absolutely, unequivocally, <i>love</i>. But it is a YA supernatural and the market is so, so tight and saturated I don’t know if it will ever be published. But I don’t, I can’t, give up on it. I may self-publish it. I may keep trying to sell it as different imprints open up (many of the major publishers are trying digital only imprints and who knows, it may find a home there. Hope springs eternal!). But I know what agents mean now when they say they must love a book to take it on because then you don’t want to – you CAN’T – give up on it because that love is so strong. They need that love to sell that book and face the rejection when it comes in. And when it doesn’t sell, you can’t understand why. <br />
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But those other three books sitting on my hard drive? Well, I think I just may be in like with them.<br />
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I have had critiquers who have indicated their love for some of them and I appreciate that so much. But while I see the books qualities, I also see their weaknesses. Two of them may have the potential to go from like to love. But they need to change. In some way. But here is the dilemma. Do I spend hours of limited writing time trying to change the like to love? Or do I start fresh, with no baggage, on a fresh shiny idea that has a strong potential for Love? I used to think that if enough revision happened on a 'like' book then the passion would explode. Bam! Love! But I now believe that you can’t manipulate that love. It has to be there from the get go. That excitement and passion must be strong enough to sustain you through the long, hard slog of the writing. And I truly believe that the writer’s interest and passion shines through in the words.<br />
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I have also heard that some writers have no clue sometimes what will sell. That the work they are passionate about and are sure will sell doesn’t and that quirky little weird book that they didn’t think had a hope in heck of interesting anybody is the one that succeeds.<br />
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I don’t know what’s right but I do know that with all the demands on a writers life that if he/she is not writing something that is bringing him/her some strong measure of satisfaction/excitement/pleasure/interest then there is no point in working on it. It’s okay to shelve it for a while. It’s okay to go back to what you once thought was a love and see if the spark reignites. If it doesn’t, don’t beat a dead manuscript. There is passion to be found in many places, in many stories. Keep looking. And, as a good writer friend told me recently, “Just don’t stop writing.”<br />
out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-86856472988508575322012-09-18T07:53:00.000-07:002012-09-18T07:53:33.967-07:00My Hockey Mom PrayerFall has not quite officially started but hockey season for The Boy already has. Opening game of the season is tonight and as I prepare for the onslaught of games, practices, tournaments, traffic, bad coffee, stressed parents, dinner in the van and other crazy that is the hockey parent/child life, I wrote a little prayer to get me (and any other hockey mom's and dad's!) through the next eight months.<br />
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<b>My Hockey Mom Prayer<br />
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May I find the best route to the hockey arena in rush hour traffic. May there not be any road closures, beginner drivers or other stressed out hockey parents in my path.<br />
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May The Boy have remembered all his equipment. May I hold my incredulous yell of frustration back when we're running late and he tells me that he MIGHT have left his hockey gloves on the floor back home.<br />
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May I find the grace not to scream at an opposing player who has just elbowed my son in the head.<br />
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May I find a spot in the arena that is actually under a working heater.<br />
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May I not get sick of Tim Horton's coffee, bagels, sandwiches and Timbits in the next eight months.<br />
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May I try, for once, to just enjoy the game and not get stressed out and embarrass my son by screaming in the third period "Jesus, Mary and Joseph! SKATE!!!!!!!"<br />
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May I have the right words to comfort and encourage him when he has a bad game and the exuberance to celebrate with him when he has a good one.<br />
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May I remember that he loves this freezing, time-consuming, money-sucking sport and that he is a thing of beauty when he skates.<br />
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And, most of all, may I remember that his childhood is passing all too quickly and that, one day, I will actually miss the all the time we spent in the van hustling back and forth between arenas. One day I will wish for that time back so let me hold it in my memory as long as I can because it is flying away from me, faster than my son on hockey skates.<br />
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out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com17tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-53429086500615519782012-09-11T08:13:00.000-07:002012-09-11T08:13:10.384-07:00Guest Blog Post – Why Doubting Your Writing Can Be a Good Thing!Just a quick note to let y'all know that I'm guest posting on Cheryl Rainfield’s <a href="http://cherylrainfield.com/blog/">blog </a>(http://cherylrainfield.com/blog/) where she was kind enough to let me muse on something all writers go through – doubting their writing. Do you doubt yourself/your writing sometime? Let me know how you deal with it.<br />
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Hope you can drop by for a visit!<br />
out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com0tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-53374609762625803632012-09-04T11:46:00.000-07:002012-09-04T11:46:52.940-07:00September 4th - Celebration Day!Hello poor neglected blog! It has been a summer of de-stressing and recovery after a year (and more!) of house reno madness so the poor neglected blog has been, well, poor and neglected!<br />
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But September has arrived and with it a hint of fall (my favourite season) and so many things to celebrate.<br />
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First, my little baby, whom I fondly refer to as THE BOY, turns 13 today. No longer a boy, not quite a man, still, always and forever my baby. Though my baby is taller than me now! Here we are at the cottage this summer. Happy Birthday, baby!<br />
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Next thing to celebrate? Two of the nicest writers on the planet have their book birthdays today too! <br />
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Debbie Ohi's 'I'M BORED' releases today!<br />
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Debbie illustrated this book with Michael Ian Black writing and I'm SO looking forward to the launch at Type books later this month. Debbie is one of the friendliest, loveliest writers (and illustrators!) I've had the pleasure of meeting. She was the one who got me on Twitter (she's SUCH a convincing speaker! :) and has been one of the guiding lights of Torkidlit. She deserves all the accolades this book is getting so what are y'all waiting for? Go <a href="http://www.amazon.ca/Im-Bored-Michael-Ian-Black/dp/1442414030">order</a> a copy now!<br />
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Speaking of lovely writers, one of the first people I met on Twitter was the lovely Linda Grimes. She is nothing short of HILARIOUS. And kind. And sweet. And wicked funny. Her book IN A FIX comes out today too! Yay for Virgo birthdays! Here's the cover<br />
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With an endorsement by one of my favourite authors Diana Galbadon! Not too shabby for a debut, eh?<br />
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Go forth and <a href="http://www.amazon.com/In-Fix-Linda-Grimes/dp/076533180">order</a> now! <a href="http://www.amazon.com/In-Fix-Linda-Grimes/dp/0765331802"></a><br />
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September is shaping up to be one birth-tastic month! Now ... where're the cakes?<br />
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out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-4275442542441300722012-08-21T09:48:00.000-07:002012-08-21T09:48:14.402-07:00In Praise of Persistence<br />
“<i>Persistence isn’t very glamorous. If genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration, then as a culture we tend to lionize the one percent. We love its flash and dazzle. But great power lies in the other ninety-nine percent. ‘It’s not that I’m so smart, said Einstein who was a consummate introvert. “It’s that I stay with problems longer.”<br />
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Susan Cain<br />
Quiet: The Power of Introverts in A World That Can’t Stop Talking<br />
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There are so many quotable moments in the book Quiet by Susan Cain, I could spend the next six months using them as blogger fodder (btw, I love that term!). But today this passage spoke to me. <br />
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Persistence.<br />
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We all advocate for it as writers. It’s one of the three P’s of publishing for me: Passion + Persistence = Published. But how eloquently Cain describes it! It’s not glitzy, it’s quite boring and almost designed to drive a soul to drink sometimes but it’s oh, so necessary if we are to get ahead in life – and not just for writing.<br />
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Daughter 2 was getting quite discouraged over her part-time summer job search. She’d been looking and submitting her resume for months but nobody was calling. Her self-esteem was slowly being whittled away because of the lack of reward for her efforts. She was close to abandoning the search but, lo and behold, she got a call for an interview a couple of weeks ago and was offered the job yesterday. Persistence, not giving up, paid off for her. But, more importantly, because she didn’t get a job right away, she truly appreciates the opportunity for work more now. She will not take this job for granted because it did not come easy. I think she’ll be a better employee because of it.<br />
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And so it is with the journey to publication. Your reward may not happen immediately but when it eventually does, the reward will taste that much sweeter for having taken a while to get to. Think about it. Do you HAVE to get an offer today? Would you be any less happy if it came in six months? Or six years?<br />
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As the Einstein quote stated, if you stay with a problem longer, you will become smarter. You will be a better writer because in the length of time that you are waiting you are also studying, connecting, crafting and developing expertise. Remind yourself daily that persistence is your friend. Embrace him well.<br />
out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-54176426866353926822012-07-17T15:03:00.001-07:002012-07-17T15:03:21.937-07:00Charisma: Does Your Main Character Have the “It” Factor?<br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">I went to see The Amazing Spiderman last weekend and I really enjoyed it. But why? I mean, I wasn’t expecting to. I already knew the story, had enjoyed the first two movies of the Sam Raimi interpretation so this reboot seemed unnecessary to me. The villain wasn’t especially scary or fascinating to me (a Lizard?? Really?), the special effects were on par with other superhero movies franchises, and the script was just okay (with more than a few moments where belief had to be suspended (genius Peter Parker using Bing as a search engine one of the funnier, minor examples). So, then, what sold this movie for me? Andrew Garfield’s portrayal of Peter Parker. He put the ‘amazing’ in The Amazing Spiderman.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">Now, I was a big fan of the first two Spiderman movies (let’s forget the third ever happened) and I thought Toby Maguire did a great job. Until I saw what Andrew Garfield did with the angsty teen character of Peter Parker. He imbued Peter with such emotion, sweetness, and anger I completely forgot about the earlier movie version. It was a pleasure to see an actor so accomplished and still so young (and, yes, the scenes between him and Emma Stone are filled with chemistry). It’s hard to put a finger on exactly what it was but the best word I can use to describe his performance is ‘charismatic’. And it got me wondering about the main character in my current WIP, Jake, and thinking what I can do as a writer to make sure he is as charismatic as possible.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">Webster’s dictionary defines charisma as “a special magnetic charm or appeal”. This doesn’t mean every main character in every story has to have this magnetic factor but I argue that your main character should definitely have a special ‘appeal’. Every character who is the star of the show/story needs to be able to have that special something in order to draw people in to them and their problems. Even mean or nasty main characters need that charm. Scarlett O’Hara is a vain, selfish, sometimes mean main character but she has that ‘it’ factor, that charm, that something in the way she sounds that makes her compelling to the reader. Hannibal Lecter is the most disgusting killer yet he is fascinating to the reader because his intelligence, his wit, draws people in like a beautiful, yet deadly, Hemlock flower.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">So, then, what are the keys to charisma? Well, if it were as simple to define as all that, everyone would be charismatic and it wouldn’t be ‘special’ would it? But here are some things that make a main character charismatic to me. Others may disagree but charisma is very dependent on the connection between the character who has ‘it’ and the reader who is reading ‘it’. So while these factors may do it for me, they may not do it for you.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">Like Andrew Garfield’s tearful response when he comes in battered and bruised and his Aunt May embraces him, a character must be able at some point to show his pain, happiness, anger, so the reader can feel what he is feeling. So the reader can sympathize with him. So it shows that your character is not a robot. Don’t be afraid to have your main character laugh or cry.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">Like Spiderman’s snarky jokes to those trying to capture him, a sense of humour shows a characters wit/intelligence. The ability to make a reader/viewer laugh draws someone to a character. I bet comedians have a lot of friends!</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">Andrew Garfield perfectly captured the loneliness of Peter Parker’s orphaned, friendless self. His yearning for Gwen Stacy and his wonder at realizing she likes him makes him sweet and creates viewers sympathy and their wanting to protect and help him. Your main character needs vulnerability to draw the reader in. Make sure he isn’t Mr. or Ms. Perfect. Nobody can sympathize with perfection.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">I’m not talking physical strength here but rather the ability to make difficult choices when the world is going one way and your character needs to go another way. Peter Parker eventually chooses to use his powers for good and not selfish reasons. He can walk away from helping others since he gets no reward and more anguish/pain than most but he chooses the right path. Even if your main character makes mistakes, eventually, his strength of character – his ability to make the right choice despite the difficulty of it – that creates a special charisma and appeal for the reader. After all, don’t we wish we all had the strength of character to always do the right thing?</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">That is the power of giving critique: the power to help elevate a writer’s craft and grow his/her confidence and the power to tear down that confidence with one or two comments that might seem innocent to you, the one giving the critique, but actually slicing a writer’s confidence in himself or his writing down to the quick. Since I’m in the middle of judging …argh. hate that word so I’ll substitute critiquing. Since I’m in the middle of critiquing a contest right now, I thought I would jot down some key things to remember when giving good critique.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">Well, of course, you say. What’s the point of critique if you don’t point out what’s wrong with the piece? But not everyone is comfortable pointing out the negative. I always say that I prefer getting a critique filled with things to improve rather than a gushing “Everything is just perfect!!”. I once had a critique partner who was so sweet and supportive and never had a bad thing to say about my writing (great for the ego, for sure!) but I stopped sending her stuff because I wasn’t getting what I needed – I needed to hear what I had to do to improve. Every writer does. That’s why good friends and family usually should not be your critique partners because they will care about your ego more than your writing. </span></span><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">3.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">It’s very tempting to suggest alternative dialogue or a change in style when you see an awkward turn of phrase or dialogue. I’ve been guilty of doing this myself. You think you’re helping the writer by offering another option to how he/she has written that scene. But, really, what you’re doing is injecting your own voice/personality/style. Don’t do this! Point out the awkward turn of phrase. Ask a question. Suggest that the dialogue perhaps sounds more mature than what a fourteen-year-old girl might sound like and the writer might want to read it over to see if they agree. Your job as a critiquer is to note the things that make you stop reading and your reactions to it. Their job as the writer is to re-write that phrase or scene (if they want to).</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">We all know that reading fiction is a subjective experience. I’ve read stuff in contests that I would never pick up on a bookshelf because it’s just not my thing but, sometimes, there were so many entries in one genre that I was asked to step in to help the overloaded judges. So I know it can be difficult to review something and provide useful commentary when you aren’t into high fantasy or murder/mystery or whatever. But sometimes you are reading things that aren’t your preference and you have to put that aside so you can critique the writing. You can still make comments on whether you think a pace is too fast or too slow, or whether a character is sympathetic or not. Try not to be overly critical because you don’t like the genre. It’s like a good teacher who must teach to 30 different personalities – we expect the same professionalism/treatment from her for each child – no matter their behaviour.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">You might be reading the first draft of the very first story a person has put to paper. You might be reading the ‘polished for the 100<sup style="line-height: 14px;">th</sup> time’ work of a veteran writer. Each critique you give must adapt to the level you can see the person is writing at. That beginner writer may need more commentary and encouragement but don’t assume that the polished work of the veteran just needs a “Great job!”. They too need to be told that the main character is working for whatever reasons (funny, sympathetic, driven, etc.), they need to know whether the pace is going well. Point out what stands out as exceptional if there is nothing really negative to critique.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px; text-align: left;">Those are just some of the main things I think about as I go through a critique exercise. What I also need to point out is that doing critique helps me with my writing in a thousand different ways. It makes me think about what I’m doing right and what I need to improve on. I think giving critique is absolutely essential to ensure a writer develops in his/her own writing.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: x-small; line-height: normal;"><span style="font-size: 10pt; line-height: 17px;">How about you? What things do you think about if/when you critique?</span></span></div>out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com13tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-86708888896431595942012-06-19T18:12:00.000-07:002012-06-20T20:07:35.294-07:00Bookshelves Make a HomeAs some of you may be aware, we’ve undergone quite a massive reno to our home the last year. I haven’t posted pictures of the reno because I’m a bit private about certain things and one of them is the space I live in. While many of you who read this blog are friends and family and I would have no problem showing you pictures of my kitchen or my bedroom, for the general public it kind of freaks me out. But I have no problem writing about the reno and one of the things I haven’t really discussed is my addiction to incorporating bookshelves into the new space.<br />
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Making sure we have a few bookshelves in various rooms is probably not surprising given the fact that I’m a writer and I love books. But part of this reno was done so that we could de-clutter and use our space efficiently. I’m trying to downsize the number of books I have and I got a Kobo Vox at Christmas for the sole purpose of downloading e-books so that I wouldn’t have to keep lugging books from shelves to make room for even more books. So what's with my obsession with bookshelves?<br />
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Well, I’ve always loved the way bookshelves warm up a room. I love searching through the titles to see what people have read. It tells me a little bit about who that person is. One of the arguments my husband and I are having is whether to incorporate many of the hardcover books he inherited from his dad. While they are quite impressive I have not read nor do I intend to read the collected works of Winston Churchill. If I or my husband haven’t read it (or glanced through it if it’s a coffee table type book) then I have no interest in seeing it on the shelf.<br />
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I love bookshelves that are cluttered and crammed, or colour coded, or neatly stacked with occasional nic-naks and photos interspersed among the books. I love any kind of shelf that has books in it!<br />
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So while I won’t post pics of my personal bookshelves I can give you an idea of the type of shelves I’ve got by showing you reasonable facisimiles.<br />
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I’ve got bookshelves in the kitchen (with cookbooks displayed, natch).<br />
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I’ve got a built in bookcase in the den which will have neatly stacked books (hardcovers) interspersed with art work and photos.<br />
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I’ve got a bookcase in the second floor landing nook that has all the YA books my author friends have written arranged in colour coded perfection by Daughter One.<br />
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I’ve got an entire wall of built-in bookcases surrounding my window seat in our bedroom that will, I’m sure, eventually be crammed full of every paperback and odd and end book that has come into our home (interspersed with photos and collectibles we’ve inherited from family).<br />
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Art, comfort, warmth. That’s what bookshelves in homes mean to me. How about you?out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-82118692504922143112012-06-11T10:07:00.001-07:002012-06-11T16:57:47.715-07:005 Critical Things to Make a YA Story Stand OutI was recently invited to speak to a children’s writing class taught by the fabulous Bev Katz Rosenbaum. Bev suggested that if I had any tips on writing YA novels the class would appreciate hearing them. I have no idea if what my two cents is worth but when I wrote down what I thought five critical things to make a YA story stand out (to me anyway) were I thought it might make a good blog post. And since I haven’t blogged in a dog’s age here they are. Like I said to the class: Take what you want, throw away the rest, simmer on the back burner but ultimately cook your own recipe. :)<br />
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<strong>1. Write Believeable, Age-appropriate Dialogue</strong><br />
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If a teen sounds like someone who is fifty-years-old you better have a solid reason why that teen sounds like that. Very formal language, using words that the teen wouldn’t know unless they went to a graduate class in English Lit., pull a reader, especially a teen, out of the story because it doesn’t sound real.<br />
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By the same token, try not to make dialogue sound too ‘teen’ – or what you think ‘teen speak’ sounds like. Trying to do teen lingo can work but use it sparingly. It can also date a novel pretty quickly. If you don’t regularly hang out with teens, you will more than likely get it wrong anyway. I wouldn’t recommend peppering every other conversation in your story with “like” or “totally” or “whatever”. <br />
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Also remember that when you are writing commercial YA or commercial YA with a literary bent (I would put John Green novels in this last category) you can have very different writing styles that will influence your dialogue. The key is making sure your character (what makes up the personality of that character) is saying what he or she would say at that particular age in his/her life. Dialogue is as much about the words being used as it is in the cadence and tone of the sentence structure. Make sure each character sounds distinct and not a carbon copy of their best friend or, God forbid, their mother.<br />
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<strong>2. Make the Pace and Conflict Fast and Plentiful</strong><br />
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Good YA stories throw you into a situation quickly with not a lot of lead up and keep that pace going at a pretty good clip. Pace was one of the hardest things I had to learn. What ultimately helped me were two things:<br />
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Jack Bickham’s book Scene and Structure<br />
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Donald Maass’s workshop on How to Write a Breakout Novel<br />
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One gave me the structure I needed to know how to get into and out of scenes quickly, and how to develop scenes that were action oriented and then followed by a breather/time to contemplate what had just happened kind of scene.<br />
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The Maass workshop gave me the best advice for creating a page-turning story – Make It Worse.<br />
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You think things are bad for your heroine if her parents ground her? Make things worse by having her sneak out of the house and get caught by police for something she REALLY shouldn’t be doing. Illegally Blonde had my heroine getting deported, then buying a fake passport, working for people she likes to help pay for that illegal document, then having to help someone commit a criminal act against those people she likes if she wants to get that passport. How far is your character willing to go to get what they want? Escalating conflict isn’t just about external obstacles. It’s also about the internal conflict those obstacles create in your heroine. Lucy likes the owner of the house abd doesn’t want to hurt them but she wants to go home very badly and wants that passport – so a conflict of conscience is created.<br />
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<strong>3. Make Your Main Character Likeable</strong><br />
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Make your character likeable – I can’t stress this enough.<br />
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She doesn’t have to be perfect but I learned the hard way that if you have a snarky, surly heroine and you put her into a situation that you think would engender sympathy does not necessarily make HER sympathetic. The author needs to show the reader elements of the main characters personality pretty early on that would engender sympathy – is she vulnerable or funny or sweet in some way? Can you show them having affection for another person or an animal? Katniss Everdeen in The Hunger Games would not be a very likeable personality if she didn’t love her sister Prim so very much and that was shown so clearly at the beginning of the story.<br />
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<strong>4. Make the Hero/Heroine’s Goal Worthwhile</strong><br />
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Whatever your main character wants must be important enough to the character for a reader to believe everything he/she does from that point on and to care enough about the character and goal to stick with him for 200 plus pages.<br />
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Teens feel so passionately about things that your heroine must be passionate about what she needs to do or obtain as well. Make it clear what the heroine wants or needs to do and why she needs to do it.<br />
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Remember, too, the goal can be denied or not achieved or even change mid-way through the story – if it leads to the heroine’s personal growth.<br />
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In THE BREAK, Abby is determined to keep her Nonna out of a senior’s residence and home with her where she thinks Nonna belongs. She wants to show her mother that she is wrong about putting Nonna in a “seniors bone garden” as she calls it and that she is responsible enough to take care of her grandmother. That goal of hers is continually thwarted. Abby ultimately achieves her goal but it comes at a great sacrifice and not in the way she envisaged. The other goal Abby had never articulated to herself or the reader is her deepest wish - reconciliation with her mother – that goal was ultimately achieved because her first goal failed so miserably.<br />
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<strong>5. Be Honest to the Character, the Story and the Reader</strong><br />
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If you are writing YA to give teens moral lessons just stop now. Teens can ferret out when adults are trying to impart ‘life lessons’ on them very easily. I’ve got 3 teens of my own and they hate being given obvious and constant advice.<br />
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If you are writing YA because writing about teens is an opportunity for you as a writer to explore a fabulously energetic, dramatic, conflicted, angst-filled, hope-filled time in a person’s life then you will write honestly and passionately and that is the most important piece of advice I can hope to impart to you.<br />
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Write Well. Write Often. Write Honestly. Write Passionately.<br />
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What are the critical things in a YA novel that makes it stand out for you?<br />
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<br />out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com14tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-43066680117220823622012-05-23T16:15:00.002-07:002012-05-23T16:15:21.358-07:00Good Writerly ThingsThis week is a good week to celebrate writing. Why? Because with all the angst of writing, or not writing, or worrying about the book that's out or the book that's about to come out or if you're doing enough, not enough, too much, whatever, we tend to not celebrate the good things that do happen. What are my good things this week?<br />
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Going to Jocelyn Shipley's <a href="http://www.benmcnallybooks.com/?q=events/book_launch_jocelyn_shipley">book launch</a> for How To Tend A Grave tomorrow at Ben McNally Books. So excited for her and this book!!<br />
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THE BREAK got its first <a href="http://www.winnipegfreepress.com/opinion/fyi/racial-tension-makes-novel-fascinating-152134895.html">review </a>- and a really nice one at that! - from the Winnipeg Free Press and so did fellow Great Plains author Brenda Hammond! Yay for good reviews!!<br />
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THE BREAK is starting to be ordered by libraries (thanks Hamilton Public Library and Oshawa Public Library!) and its on the shelves at Chapters/Indigo (Canada's major book chain) across the country (never a sure thing in these days of shrinking book shelf space)!<br />
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So, all in all, a pretty good writing news week. What about you? We need more celebrations and less worry!out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com5tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-47546050196487304142012-05-17T15:58:00.000-07:002012-05-17T15:58:08.668-07:00Summer Writing GoalsThe May 2-4 weekend approaches (yes, I know it’s not always on May 24th but here in Canuck land the Victoria Day weekend is known as May 2-4 because of the ubiquitous celebration of the start of summer with a case of beer (24 bottles) at the cottage.) and it symbolically heralds the official start of the summer season even though summer doesn’t begin until June 20th. Now usually I don’t do goals for summer. Goals in my mind mean pressure to accomplish something. The only things I usually want to accomplish in the summer are reading a stack of trashy magazines and getting my legs tanned. But this year I need to have goals because, honestly, I have been running around like a crazy lady and feeling like I’ve not accomplished much lately.<br />
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I may be being a little harsh on myself since we did finally move into our house after over a year of reno’s so that was a huge accomplishment. But there are still so many things to do and never enough time to do them. What I have been most lax about has been my writing. I have had bursts of writing over the last year but not the steady, progressive output that I usually produced. So, beyond my neverending list of household goals (e.g. get a den couch! Paint the blanket chest! Get a dining room light fixture! Build a fence! – don’t exclamation points make things sound exciting rather than the pain in the arse they really are?) I have a few writing goals that I need to accomplish by September so that I can once again feel like I’m making progress in that part of my life rather than stagnating or falling backwards.<br />
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For better or worse, here are my summer writing goals for 2012:<br />
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<b>READ MORE</b><br />
I know, I know. I said writing goals. Not reading goals. But wait a minute. Every serious writer knows that to re-energize, to get better, to learn craft, to revel in the joy of story, one must read other writers. I have a slew of amazing books to read this year –my fellow Great Plains Teen authors books (How To Tend a Grave by Jocelyn Shipley<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjP0alXhTpzic-4Zp6Du7XFVJceITWEejWzgtc3uU9LTHGPsmMVefTF8LwOIlx9htAEJl0ehAPDwcXDx-66ezbRRCUAVjm9zWtxEXzL2JbaBMNqNQbxWhVzBbwCcXUL2ydxw5wMHojifSf7/s1600/How+to+Tend.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left:1em; margin-right:1em"><img border="0" height="200" width="200" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjP0alXhTpzic-4Zp6Du7XFVJceITWEejWzgtc3uU9LTHGPsmMVefTF8LwOIlx9htAEJl0ehAPDwcXDx-66ezbRRCUAVjm9zWtxEXzL2JbaBMNqNQbxWhVzBbwCcXUL2ydxw5wMHojifSf7/s200/How+to+Tend.jpg" /></a></div><br />
, Cape Town by Brenda Hammond <div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhNmfsQw1XJUsdPIr7uJcqZSoH-9_tDASWYJYu38omRvTpMYRyxU54OrIy2Qaqg0xDnO-8vyoPYgcc0Psf0IKXB_8MM6YhuPCJaa4yjHAsmXVPGjBydBO3dc6Mt8RvODI7cKrLMkFRiFuyt/s1600/cape+town.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left:1em; margin-right:1em"><img border="0" height="200" width="200" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEhNmfsQw1XJUsdPIr7uJcqZSoH-9_tDASWYJYu38omRvTpMYRyxU54OrIy2Qaqg0xDnO-8vyoPYgcc0Psf0IKXB_8MM6YhuPCJaa4yjHAsmXVPGjBydBO3dc6Mt8RvODI7cKrLMkFRiFuyt/s200/cape+town.jpg" /></a></div><br />
and The Green-eyed Queen of Suicide City by Kevin Marc Fournier<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgRI88jnOBQaJSEKPQuNLuL20DCEezlkdr7788-aCBlLFROKi0TDYc4JhPrgmRoe9PIJl_KvhPTtifTJ5nbMSIqBJcyS3e6Sl5OEaTjd1sR9qC8PbZPyScPpCMErQjtTlFysbsoSy1c_QcT/s1600/9781926531267sm.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left:1em; margin-right:1em"><img border="0" height="200" width="134" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgRI88jnOBQaJSEKPQuNLuL20DCEezlkdr7788-aCBlLFROKi0TDYc4JhPrgmRoe9PIJl_KvhPTtifTJ5nbMSIqBJcyS3e6Sl5OEaTjd1sR9qC8PbZPyScPpCMErQjtTlFysbsoSy1c_QcT/s200/9781926531267sm.jpg" /></a></div><br />
); my fellow Torkidlit author’s books (some on my list include Hunted by Cheryl Rainfield<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgsdHYhddLZnPgQAJaH7_wDWPH0SAiTM3yIxpEAu_u__xed2fRZd6aU7cuDkU3CL20ZnAyMcOy4JR-9tY7huh4TGJNaPbLvdspF0sAfXkvEl52shPjnvqLedZE-GwlU9aQy_Ro4vVpIp_rt/s1600/hunted.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left:1em; margin-right:1em"><img border="0" height="200" width="130" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEgsdHYhddLZnPgQAJaH7_wDWPH0SAiTM3yIxpEAu_u__xed2fRZd6aU7cuDkU3CL20ZnAyMcOy4JR-9tY7huh4TGJNaPbLvdspF0sAfXkvEl52shPjnvqLedZE-GwlU9aQy_Ro4vVpIp_rt/s200/hunted.jpg" /></a></div><br />
, Real Mermaids Don’t Hold Their Breath by Helene Boudreau<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj5gG2h1U8j5QiamPfFlQAkymdRvPgJbTKb1jXkUHhg5galxDbt36CVOoKCYWn86RDlcfsRzKrPWGDWyXcWfp5iRYb5P9RE8dd0CfQmPaoU0RTirV2cJUSP9SYIz9vcv3qwAyAVHyMncP2F/s1600/51XksYdCUnL._BO2%252C204%252C203%252C200_PIsitb-sticker-arrow-click%252CTopRight%252C35%252C-76_AA300_SH20_OU01_.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left:1em; margin-right:1em"><img border="0" height="200" width="200" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEj5gG2h1U8j5QiamPfFlQAkymdRvPgJbTKb1jXkUHhg5galxDbt36CVOoKCYWn86RDlcfsRzKrPWGDWyXcWfp5iRYb5P9RE8dd0CfQmPaoU0RTirV2cJUSP9SYIz9vcv3qwAyAVHyMncP2F/s200/51XksYdCUnL._BO2%252C204%252C203%252C200_PIsitb-sticker-arrow-click%252CTopRight%252C35%252C-76_AA300_SH20_OU01_.jpg" /></a></div><br />
, Under the Moon by Deborah Kerbel<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: center;"><a href="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjwNPZo0yNnGId7eMwE9-4tWkTCJoRjiOzW1nf8Fb3zYkmr0N8W1__o0BXqgw1ZgOsDk_a4RRrzm9TxVsdJrCE9LWcQ0LBkALAEVycbGapEMA54438heyaRauPks-cYEnx89UMuI2qnEAiK/s1600/Under+the+Moon+by+Deborah+Kerbel.jpg" imageanchor="1" style="margin-left:1em; margin-right:1em"><img border="0" height="200" width="125" src="https://blogger.googleusercontent.com/img/b/R29vZ2xl/AVvXsEjwNPZo0yNnGId7eMwE9-4tWkTCJoRjiOzW1nf8Fb3zYkmr0N8W1__o0BXqgw1ZgOsDk_a4RRrzm9TxVsdJrCE9LWcQ0LBkALAEVycbGapEMA54438heyaRauPks-cYEnx89UMuI2qnEAiK/s200/Under+the+Moon+by+Deborah+Kerbel.jpg" /></a></div><br />
and more coming after the summer – especially Maureen McGowan’s Deviants (Dust Chronicles Book#1), Debbie Ohi’s I’m Bored and Natalie Hyde’s Hockey Girl.) Torkidlit authors are so prolific and the group is expanding so much I can hardly keep up with all the amazingness coming out of these writers. But I know that whichever book I pick up I will learn and be inspired by in my own writing.<br />
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<b>WRITE REGULARLY</b><br />
I used to write almost every day, every time I got on the subway in the morning and again on the way home from work, then I’d put in another hour or two (or more) that evening. While that was an intense schedule – sometimes I wouldn’t get to bed until 1:30 in the morning – and I won’t be able to keep up that pace in my current semi-exhausted state - whatever I write (and I currently have an almost finished WIP and a just started WIP) I need to strive to write something for either of those two books every day. Just like I need to take my vitamins every day to stay healthy, I need to write every day to keep my writing healthy.<br />
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<b>GET BACK ON TWITTER REGULARLY</b><br />
Now this sounds weird, but Twitter actually is not a distraction for my writing. I mostly follow other writers and I need to hear what they’re up to and get a kick in the pants by following the #amwriting hashtag and celebrating their successes and commiserating with their struggles. The children’s writing community is one of the most helpful and encouraging ones out there and I need that to kick start me again.<br />
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<b>REVAMP THE BLOG</b><br />
There’s old info and old pictures and I need a new background. Plus I need to get back to blogging regularly. ‘Nuff said.<br />
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<b>TALK UP THE BREAK</b><br />
I need to connect with some other bloggers about doing interviews, send some info out to some groups to let them know about THE BREAK (especially the Alzheimer’s Society) and other writers who are generous about spreading the word on new books. Publishing with an independent Canadian press means an author has to do a little more work in getting the word out there about their book or else we get lost in the noise of new books from the larger presses.<br />
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<b>JUDGE CONTEST ENTRIES</b><br />
The last couple of years I took a break from judging the Toronto Romance Writers annual contest for unpublished writers but I agreed to do it again this year. Judging contests is an amazing way to hone in on craft and voice and the things that work and don’t work in the beginning of a book. While I can’t commit to a writing workshop or conference this summer, judging a contest helps to get the analytical side of my writing brain working which always helps the creative side of my brain.<br />
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<b>FINISH THE DAMN WIP</b><br />
I’m almost 45,000 words into a planned 60-65,000 YA contemporary that I think is not complete crapola (that is high praise for me for a WIP). If I can just finish the darn thing!! Another 100 pages will do it. If I just write a measly two pages a day I can finish it in less than a couple of months. Here I have to invoke one of my favourite quotes from Nike: Just Do It.<br />
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<b>PREPARE TO QUERY AGENTS</b><br />
This is more of a September goal but by the end of the summer I want that WIP polished and a query letter ready to go. I need to get back in the game and I need to be ready to do it. My home life may be crazy but it is no longer SUPER crazy. Another quote I like: No More Excuses.<br />
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So that’s it. I know I should have added one more goal: DRINK MORE RED WINE but that makes me sleepy. And I need to be energized, not lethargic. How about you? Any summer writing goals for you or are you taking a wee bit of a break to enjoy sun, sand and water?out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com8tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-49717525143688806532012-05-03T14:48:00.001-07:002012-05-03T18:24:42.739-07:00Mood and Creativity<div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;"></span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">I always believed that whole idea of being in the ‘mood’ to write was poppycock (aside: I believe that is the first time in my life I have written the word ‘poppycock’). I was/am a firm believer in BICHOK (Butt in chair. Hands on Keyboard) no matter what – rain, shine, happy, sad, inspired or not just get the words down and do it every day and presto (well, presto may involve months of BICHOK) you have a workable first draft of a book. But lately, especially with this last year of highly stressful personal life and emotions going through the wringer and the myriad of decisions, decisions, decisions that I’ve had to attend to, my BICHOK approach has changed to BIBHOC (Butt in bed. Hands on Chocolate) more often than not. I have come to believe that mentally – emotionally – I have to be in a good mood to write, to create something. </span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">I’ve even looked up some articles to justify this shameful revelation of mine. See the following story about how being in a positive mood boosts creativity at work.</span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;"> <a href="http://psychcentral.com/news/2010/12/16/positive-mood-improves-creativity/21879.html">http://psychcentral.com/news/2010/12/16/positive-mood-improves-creativity/21879.html</a></span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;"></span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">You’d think this would be a no brainer. Of course you have to be in a good mood to create! How else can you access all those wonderful areas of the brain that surprise you with their inventiveness unless you are relaxed, open, stress-free? But …</span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">What about those grumpy, unhappy, miserable, hermit-like writers who create masterpieces yet seem to hate everything in the world? </span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">What about all those writers writing on a deadline, who have ill relatives, had their car break down, lost their wallet etc. etc. and still write and create amazing books. </span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">Why can some people do that? Why can’t I???</span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">I wonder if it has been because my environment (my home) has been in such disruption lately that (homebody that I am) I have been unable to adjust as well to that stress as I could have to the litany of stressors I just listed above? I think, for me, my environment directly affects my mood thus my ability to write. <span style="mso-spacerun: yes;"> </span>And by environment I don’t mean I have to be sitting in my living room chair with the lamp on and my favourite pillow behind me. No, I can write on the subway, in cars, at skating arenas, in doctors offices – anywhere really. I can tune out the outside world. But if I don’t have that refuge to escape to at the end of the day or if that refuge is so disrupted that it is no longer a refuge but someplace I dread going, then that seriously affects my ability to write.</span></div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><br />
</div><div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0in 0in 0pt;"><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">So for me, environment affects mood which affects my writing. Or lack of it. What about you? Do you need to be in a good mood to write well? Or does angst and stress actually bring out the creative beast inside you?</span></div>out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com13tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-89133546009756386742012-04-24T07:59:00.001-07:002012-04-24T07:59:08.336-07:00Dreams vs. Reality. Which do you prefer?As I take yet another vacation day to wait for the delivery of a brand new wall oven to replace the brand new wall oven I had just installed in the home reno, a saying I've heard from people who have renovated their homes comes to mind: <br />
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"No one ever tells you that a dream house can sometimes become a nightmare."<br />
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That pretty much sums up the last three weeks of moving out, moving in, and dealing with the ongoing business of a house reno. It has been, if not exactly a nightmare, then certainly less than perfect. Certainly, not a dream. But what I failed to remember is that while dreams are supposed to be perfect real life is not.<br />
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Real life is messy. It has problems. Most of the time it cannot be controlled. Real life has other people in it. People make mistakes. People fail to show up. <br />
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Dreams are ethereal. They are images in your mind. Dreams are things you can control. There is no one who can mess up a dream for you because your dream is in a bubble-wrapped present, sitting in that perfectly decorated living room with designer art on the walls.<br />
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You can't touch a dream. You can't live in a dream. A dream can't hold you when you're crying out in exhaustion or frustration. Only the people in your real life can do that.<br />
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But I still believe dreams are important. A dream can sustain you. Especially when real life is beating you over the head with its problems.<br />
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So, while I sit in my still disorganized, unfinished house I hold on to my dream of one day having a neat, perfectly finished house. But I make sure that I'm realistic in my expectations. For example: My dream today is that my wall oven will arrive and actually work this time. My reality? I keep the listing of take out restaurants close beside me, just in case. :)<br />
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How about you? Which world do you prefer to live in? Dream world or Reality?<br />out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-91942090343108772532012-04-04T14:09:00.000-07:002012-04-04T14:09:09.884-07:00Life is Crazy But I'm Still Having a Book Launch!T-minus 4 days till the big move and the house is turned upside down. At one point today there were about 8 vans from various trades in the house. Out of chaos comes order, right? But AFTER chaos comes the book launch for THE BREAK. With all the crazy my life has had lately, I've been guilty of neglecting this book I am so very proud of. But come April 20th, from 5-7 pm I'll be celebrating its arrival with a launch at TYPE Books on 833 Queen St. W. You know TYPE Books, right? It's that cool indy bookstore that gave us this awesome video:<br />
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I am thrilled to be launching THE BREAK at one of Toronto's coolest book stores.<br />
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I hope if you're in the Toronto area, you can join me! There may or may not be cannoli for treats. :) You'll have to drop by and find out!out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-36217614346714392712012-03-28T15:47:00.002-07:002012-03-28T15:53:04.601-07:00Why Did I Write This Story?Before I fall off the face of the earth (well, actually, just into the abyss that is prepping for our big move into our semi-finished reno in a couple of weeks) I wanted to get in this blog entry about why I wrote THE BREAK.<br />
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It’s the question every author should ask themselves before and during writing their book: WHY are you writing this story? If you are writing a story because something is hot in the industry (e.g. post-apocalyptic, dystopian, vampires, etc.) this post is not for you. I wish you well in chasing that elusive and all important “what’s hot in YA novels these days” trend. What I’m going to touch on is different. It is the meaning behind your story – the core truth you want to highlight, explore, reveal for yourself and, ultimately, your reader. Why is this story important to YOU?<br />
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THE BREAK began with a simple thought, one that came into my head as I saw my mom interacting with my kids in that completely unselfish, completely there, unconditional love she and my dad have for them. “This is the purest kind of love”, I thought. From there came the less happy thought, “What would my kids life be without their grandparents in it? What would they lose? What would my parents lose?”<br />
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Once those thoughts start happening then, if you’re a writer, you know a story line will surely follow. So Abby Lambert and her beloved, Nonna, were born.<br />
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Around the same time that I was thinking about writing a love story about a girl and her grandmother, I also decided to bring the aging theme – and all the constraints and difficulties aging creates – into sharp focus by making Nonna be in the early stages of Alzheimer’s. Memory - and all that means to relationships and family and the passing down of family history from grandparent to grandchild – is a fascinating thing. Without it we have no connection to each other. How does the loss of memories affect relationships? How do family members react when this starts to happen? I knew so many people whose lives have been impacted by various forms of dementia. So many times I heard people say it was almost harder to deal with seeing their parents/grandparents/spouse etc. losing their memory than if they were dealing with a physical illness.<br />
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Finally, I wanted to look at how we, as a society, treat our seniors. Much of THE BREAK is set in a retirement/nursing home. Do our young adults connect with seniors in any substantive way? What can we learn from them? What do young people lose when they don’t interact with our seniors?<br />
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All this to say, I had all of these “ideas” or “themes” swirling around my head as I plotted out what would happen to Abby and her Nonna in THE BREAK. I didn’t write the story to send a “message” but I wanted the story to have a “meaning”. To me, anyway. After all, an author is her first audience and if the author doesn’t care enough about the story then why is she writing the thing?<br />
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Here’s hoping all your stories mean something to you. Because otherwise, what’s the point?out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com6tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-83448831188703189622012-03-14T15:29:00.003-07:002012-03-14T15:30:40.996-07:00And the winner is...Shakespeare!!
I'll be contacting you to get your mailing address and sending you a copy of THE BREAK as soon as possible (this may have to be a few days as I'm currently on a deadline to select kitchen and bathroom faucets as well as other sundry hardware items for the reno!) But no later than early next week for sure! I do hope you enjoy THE BREAK, Shakespeare. And thanks everyone, so much for leaving a comment.
As for other winners, how about everyone who's enjoying this amazing March Break weather. We didn't even have to go to Florida! I'll be taking the next couple of days off to do family shtuff but I'll be back next week for a blog post. I want to talk a little bit about why I wrote THE BREAK and start discussing the devastating disease that is Alzheimer's. But for now I want to leave you with a picture of what I love most about Spring - which is just around the corner people!
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READING OUTSIDE!!! WhooHOOOOOOO!!out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com2tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-772560852349924056.post-77152169807598783382012-03-05T17:37:00.000-08:002012-03-05T17:37:16.088-08:00Author Copies Arrive!! Time for a Giveaway!My author copies of THE BREAK arrived today just in time for, you guessed it, March Break next week. Aren't they pretty? :)
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I don't think they're on shelves yet but if you'd like, maybe, to get an early read I'd love to give away a copy to a good home. So, just leave a comment and if you're in North America I'll mail you THE BREAK. Comments on until next Tuesday the 13th then I (or maybe The Boy) will pull a name out of a hat (he likes doing stuff like that! Unlike his homework).out of the wordworkhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15919130781982475478noreply@blogger.com10